Tuesday, August 16, 2011

Im handing in this short story as a writing sample of my greatest work. What do you think about it?

I like your style , it kept me up then down then up again ......then down AGAIN . But then I looked it over again and found that the Mr. Platypus was used 21 times.......a little much don't you think ? Could you not give him a first name at least ? But over all I liked the story .

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